topic:teen pregnacy
message:preventing teen pregnacy
comunity:u.s.
target adince:teens 14-21
audices to do: for more info stayteen.org
slogan:kids should not have kids
group name:the anti teen father factor
wht audience supoused to do : for more information visit http://www.stayteen.org/
facts to backupmessage:
More than half of sexually active men in the United States will become infected with the human papillomavirus (HPV) at some point in their lives. An estimated 2.3 million males aged 15–24 contracted new HPV infections in 2000, and 4.6 million were infected and thus capable of spreading the virus. [11, 13]
11. Weinstock H, Berman S and Cates W, Jr., Sexually transmitted diseases among American youth: incidence and prevalence estimates, 2000, Perspectives on Sexual and Reproductive Health, 36(1):6–10. 13. CDC, Genital HPV infection, CDC Fact Sheet, Atlanta: CDC, 2007. topic: Teen pregnancy message: To prevent teen pregnancy community: U.S target audiance: Male 14-21 audiance to do: for more information go to stayteen.org slogan: Kids should not have kids group name: The Anti-teen father factor facts to back up message: do not have sex at all it's the only 100% effective method of preventing pregnancy and STDs. Teen pregnancy is about when teens have sex with guys when they are at their young age. some teen's may not know about or clueless about being pregnant or being fathers. it is still going on about 1,000 woman get pregnant at age 15 to 19 a day and 1,000 men getting jobs or a hard life with a baby FOR EXAMPLE: (A teen wrote a comment.) Finding a job is a difficult task for all young people, and with the job market being what it is these days, it’s gotten even harder. The teen pregnancy rate in the USA rose 3% in 2006 and the unemployment rate for teen fathers is around 57%. Teen fatherhood rates vary considerably by race. In 2001, the rate among young black men (37 per 1,000 males aged 15–19) was more than twice that among similar whites
In both 1995 and 2002, about one-quarter of sexually experienced 15–19-year-old males reported ever having had an HIV test. [15] Sex with other men is the primary mode of HIV transmission among adolescent and young adult men. Many adolescents and young adults who have sex with men are unaware they are infected with HIV, reducing motivation to alter risky behaviors and increasing risk of transmission. [16, 17] More than three-quarters of young men will become sexually active by age 20. Almost all (96%) will have sex prior to marriage. [5] Teen pregnancy is about when teens have sex with guys when they are at their young age. some teen's may not know about or clueless about being pregnant or being fathers. ScienceDaily (Mar. 30, 2011) — Public interest in the issue of teenage childbearing has recently increased, largely due to increases in both the teen pregnancy rate and the teen birth rate. A new study published in Economic Inquiry examines the negative educational and economic outcomes of teenage fatherhood, a topic far less researched than teenage motherhood. Teen fathers are less likely to earn a high school diploma, according to the New Mexico Teen Pregnancy Coalition similar whites
More than three-quarters of young men will become sexually active by age 20. Almost all (96%) will have sex prior to marriage. [5] Hispanic teens who normally have a higher birth rate than the rest of the popullation.Two-thirds of pregnacy occar among teens at age 18 to 19. Teens who become pregnant are mostly not to attend collage. Although teenage mothers and fathers that work are more likely to fail or expelled high school or earn their GEDs than in the past.
Their are some countrys that are less teen pregnancies in other countrys then the U.S. The U.S rates are twice as high as in England and Wales or Canada, and eight times as high as in the Netherlands or Japan. Out of all teenage pregnancies, 29% are terminated by abortion. In both 1995 and 2002, about one-quarter of sexually experienced 15–19-year-old males reported ever having had an HIV test. [15] Sex with other men is the primary mode of HIV transmission among adolescent and young adult men. Many adolescents and young adults who have sex with men are unaware they are infected with HIV, reducing motivation to alter risky behaviors and increasing risk of transmission.
ScienceDaily (Mar. 30, 2011) — Public interest in the issue of teenage childbearing has recently increased, largely due to increases in both the teen pregnancy rate and the teen birth rate. A new study published in Economic Inquiry examines the negative educational and economic outcomes of teenage fatherhood, a topic far less researched than teenage motherhood.
acording to http://www.guttmacher.org/pubs/fb_YMSRH.html the condom use decreses with the age of teens. acording to http://www.guttmacher.org/pubs/fb_YMSRH.html more than 76%of 9th grade students used comdoms on their last sexual intercouse and 60% of 12th grade students their female parner used a pill.
REASEARCH PAPER
to prevent teen pregnancy by abstaning
Do not abstan at all it's the only 100% effective method of preventing pregnancy and STD's. Some teen's may not know about or clueless about being pregnant or being fathers. it is still going on about 1,000 woman get pregnant at age 15 to 19 a day and 1,000 men getting jobs or a hard life with a baby.
our slogan is about kids shouldn't have kids because when you are a kid you can't raise a baby cause there is no jobs when you under the age of 18 and the baby would live without money. The babies need to be taken care of and they need to be feed. the kid can't stay home because of their education and to have a good job so you take care of a baby. kids shouldn't have kids because they cost alot of money. we are targeting Male 14-21 because we want teens to be safe. and to get their attention so incase we tell them what will happen to them if they do have sex.
what i would like for the audience todo is to go to the web site stay teen because this web site has many things and filled with many facts and information that cand help both guys and girls to prevent pregnacy and this website also probides suport and many more things
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4 the audience and the comunity that are targetting
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No main idea, purpose, or central theme exists; reader must infer this based on sketchy or missing details
Main idea is vague; maybe broad or simplistic
Main idea is well-marked by quality details but could benefit from additional information
Main idea is clear, supported, and enriched by relevant anecdotes and details
Organization
Hard to follow; needs much re-ordering
Some out of place information; attempt at structure
Order works well with topic and purpose; strong leads, thoughtful transitions
Flat language or thesaurus overload; author searches for words to convey meaning
Impaired meaning but now and then a “juicy” phrase or some “salsa” (Missing at least one strong very, quality adjective or “ly” word per paragraph)
Precise, vivid, natural language; striking, fresh phrases (Most paragraphs have more than one strong verb)
Powerful, stunning verbs; you want to read it more than once to savor the words (Many strong verbs and quality adjectives in piece)
Sentence Fluency
Awkward enough to make reader stumble, re-read often (Relies too much on one particular type of opener)
Mechanical, but still readable; repetitive beginnings (A few different sentence openers)
Easy going flow, highly readable, purposeful sentence beginnings (Different sentence openers and some transitions)
Skims, sings, dances along like a lively script; easy to read with inflection (Many different sentence openers and excellent transitions)
Voice
Author is incapable of personalizing at this stage due to struggling with idea
Author’s voice is hard to recognize, even if reader is trying desperately to “hear” it
Author attempts to address topic, purpose, and audience in sincere and engaging way; piece still skips a beat here and there
Author speaks directly to reader in individual, compelling, and engaging way that delivers purpose and topic; although passionate, author is respectful or audience and purpose
Noticeable, distracting errors that may affect meaning
Author has reasonable control over standard conventions for grade level; conventions are sometimes handled well; at other times, errors distract and impair readability
Errors are few and only minor editing is needed to publish
first thing that i would like the viewers to do right after whatching my psa is to visit http://www.stayteen.org/ because this website has many things that can help teen to
message:preventing teen pregnacy
comunity:u.s.
target adince:teens 14-21
audices to do: for more info stayteen.org
slogan:kids should not have kids
group name:the anti teen father factor
wht audience supoused to do : for more information visit http://www.stayteen.org/
facts to backupmessage:
More than half of sexually active men in the United States will become infected with the human papillomavirus (HPV) at some point in their lives. An estimated 2.3 million males aged 15–24 contracted new HPV infections in 2000, and 4.6 million were infected and thus capable of spreading the virus. [11, 13]
11. Weinstock H, Berman S and Cates W, Jr., Sexually transmitted diseases among American youth: incidence and prevalence estimates, 2000, Perspectives on Sexual and Reproductive Health, 36(1):6–10. 13. CDC, Genital HPV infection, CDC Fact Sheet, Atlanta: CDC, 2007. topic: Teen pregnancy message: To prevent teen pregnancy community: U.S target audiance: Male 14-21 audiance to do: for more information go to stayteen.org slogan: Kids should not have kids group name: The Anti-teen father factor facts to back up message: do not have sex at all it's the only 100% effective method of preventing pregnancy and STDs. Teen pregnancy is about when teens have sex with guys when they are at their young age. some teen's may not know about or clueless about being pregnant or being fathers. it is still going on about 1,000 woman get pregnant at age 15 to 19 a day and 1,000 men getting jobs or a hard life with a baby FOR EXAMPLE: (A teen wrote a comment.) Finding a job is a difficult task for all young people, and with the job market being what it is these days, it’s gotten even harder. The teen pregnancy rate in the USA rose 3% in 2006 and the unemployment rate for teen fathers is around 57%. Teen fatherhood rates vary considerably by race. In 2001, the rate among young black men (37 per 1,000 males aged 15–19) was more than twice that among similar whites
In both 1995 and 2002, about one-quarter of sexually experienced 15–19-year-old males reported ever having had an HIV test. [15] Sex with other men is the primary mode of HIV transmission among adolescent and young adult men. Many adolescents and young adults who have sex with men are unaware they are infected with HIV, reducing motivation to alter risky behaviors and increasing risk of transmission. [16, 17] More than three-quarters of young men will become sexually active by age 20. Almost all (96%) will have sex prior to marriage. [5] Teen pregnancy is about when teens have sex with guys when they are at their young age. some teen's may not know about or clueless about being pregnant or being fathers. ScienceDaily (Mar. 30, 2011) — Public interest in the issue of teenage childbearing has recently increased, largely due to increases in both the teen pregnancy rate and the teen birth rate. A new study published in Economic Inquiry examines the negative educational and economic outcomes of teenage fatherhood, a topic far less researched than teenage motherhood. Teen fathers are less likely to earn a high school diploma, according to the New Mexico Teen Pregnancy Coalition similar whites
More than three-quarters of young men will become sexually active by age 20. Almost all (96%) will have sex prior to marriage. [5] Hispanic teens who normally have a higher birth rate than the rest of the popullation.Two-thirds of pregnacy occar among teens at age 18 to 19. Teens who become pregnant are mostly not to attend collage. Although teenage mothers and fathers that work are more likely to fail or expelled high school or earn their GEDs than in the past.
Their are some countrys that are less teen pregnancies in other countrys then the U.S. The U.S rates are twice as high as in England and Wales or Canada, and eight times as high as in the Netherlands or Japan. Out of all teenage pregnancies, 29% are terminated by abortion. In both 1995 and 2002, about one-quarter of sexually experienced 15–19-year-old males reported ever having had an HIV test. [15] Sex with other men is the primary mode of HIV transmission among adolescent and young adult men. Many adolescents and young adults who have sex with men are unaware they are infected with HIV, reducing motivation to alter risky behaviors and increasing risk of transmission.
ScienceDaily (Mar. 30, 2011) — Public interest in the issue of teenage childbearing has recently increased, largely due to increases in both the teen pregnancy rate and the teen birth rate. A new study published in Economic Inquiry examines the negative educational and economic outcomes of teenage fatherhood, a topic far less researched than teenage motherhood.
acording to http://www.guttmacher.org/pubs/fb_YMSRH.html the condom use decreses with the age of teens. acording to http://www.guttmacher.org/pubs/fb_YMSRH.html more than 76%of 9th grade students used comdoms on their last sexual intercouse and 60% of 12th grade students their female parner used a pill.
REASEARCH PAPER
to prevent teen pregnancy by abstaning
Do not abstan at all it's the only 100% effective method of preventing pregnancy and STD's. Some teen's may not know about or clueless about being pregnant or being fathers. it is still going on about 1,000 woman get pregnant at age 15 to 19 a day and 1,000 men getting jobs or a hard life with a baby.our slogan is about kids shouldn't have kids because when you are a kid you can't raise a baby cause there is no jobs when you under the age of 18 and the baby would live without money. The babies need to be taken care of and they need to be feed. the kid can't stay home because of their education and to have a good job so you take care of a baby. kids shouldn't have kids because they cost alot of money. we are targeting Male 14-21 because we want teens to be safe. and to get their attention so incase we tell them what will happen to them if they do have sex.
what i would like for the audience todo is to go to the web site stay teen because this web site has many things and filled with many facts and information that cand help both guys and girls to prevent pregnacy and this website also probides suport and many more things
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first thing that i would like the viewers to do right after whatching my psa is to visit http://www.stayteen.org/ because this website has many things that can help teen to