Capital punishment is putting criminals that killed some one and killing them as there own punishment . it is also like saying an eye for an eye a tooth for a tooth becase you took someones life you should pay with your life. I belive that it is a good punishment so later on criminals think before killing any one, in addition it is also a good punishment because when a criminal kills a inosent person it effects that persons family. My first reasone is that capital punishment gives closure to families that haved sufered alot. my secon reason is that it forms a diffrent fom of crime deterent. my final reason is that it give prececuders another bargain chip in an plea bargain procces, witch is essential in cuting cost in an over crowded coutsystem.
When some body kills another person that didnt do anything wrong. Families of crime victims sufer a lot and
Writing Rubric
1-Developing
2-Emerging
3-Proficient
4-Exemplary
Ideas
No main idea, purpose, or central theme exists; reader must infer this based on sketchy or missing details
Main idea is vague; maybe broad or simplistic
Main idea is well-marked by quality details but could benefit from additional information
Main idea is clear, supported, and enriched by relevant anecdotes and details
Organization
Hard to follow; needs much re-ordering
Some out of place information; attempt at structure
Order works well with topic and purpose; strong leads, thoughtful transitions
Flat language or thesaurus overload; author searches for words to convey meaning
Impaired meaning but now and then a “juicy” phrase or some “salsa” (Missing at least one strong very, quality adjective or “ly” word per paragraph)
Precise, vivid, natural language; striking, fresh phrases (Most paragraphs have more than one strong verb)
Powerful, stunning verbs; you want to read it more than once to savor the words (Many strong verbs and quality adjectives in piece)
Sentence Fluency
Awkward enough to make reader stumble, re-read often (Relies too much on one particular type of opener)
Mechanical, but still readable; repetitive beginnings (A few different sentence openers)
Easy going flow, highly readable, purposeful sentence beginnings (Different sentence openers and some transitions)
Skims, sings, dances along like a lively script; easy to read with inflection (Many different sentence openers and excellent transitions)
Voice
Author is incapable of personalizing at this stage due to struggling with idea
Author’s voice is hard to recognize, even if reader is trying desperately to “hear” it
Author attempts to address topic, purpose, and audience in sincere and engaging way; piece still skips a beat here and there
Author speaks directly to reader in individual, compelling, and engaging way that delivers purpose and topic; although passionate, author is respectful or audience and purpose
Noticeable, distracting errors that may affect meaning
Author has reasonable control over standard conventions for grade level; conventions are sometimes handled well; at other times, errors distract and impair readability
Errors are few and only minor editing is needed to publish
12/26/11
Capital punishment is putting criminals that killed some one and killing them as there own punishment . it is also like saying an eye for an eye a tooth for a tooth becase you took someones life you should pay with your life. I belive that it is a good punishment so later on criminals think before killing any one, in addition it is also a good punishment because when a criminal kills a inosent person it effects that persons family. My first reasone is that capital punishment gives closure to families that haved sufered alot. my secon reason is that it forms a diffrent fom of crime deterent. my final reason is that it give prececuders another bargain chip in an plea bargain procces, witch is essential in cuting cost in an over crowded coutsystem.
When some body kills another person that didnt do anything wrong. Families of crime victims sufer a lot and
ORGANIZATION -
WORD CHOICE -
SENTENCE FLUENCY -
VOICE -
CONVENTIONS -
Comments/Next Steps: - INCOMPLETE
Level -Level 1
Grade - 20%